A gentle in my region submitted through the Gulf Wars consultation table the following emblazon and blazon:
Based on my own observations and the comments it's received thus far through the Ansteorran College of Heralds' online commentary system, I think the submission is going to be returned because the "point pointed" isn't properly drawn and is barely overall.
I'd like to approach the submitter with some viable alternatives, so I'm asking the heraldic community to advise me on the following:



I'd like opinions on both the blazon and emblazon, including their heraldic validity and, if applicable, their historic plausibility. I'd also love to hear about any additional options close to the submitter's original intent that might be available.